I
think the main thing that I gathered when watching the peer editing instructional,
was that you should edit with respect. I know that when I get my papers peer
edited, if they don't give some sort of complement I automatically discredit
what they have to say. So when I watched the instructional on how to peer edit
having the first step, as complementing definitely seemed right. The second
step of the process is suggesting. I like the fact that the video has this
second because once again it allows you to gain the trust of whom you are
editing. If you want someone to listen to your suggestions then you have to
gain their trust that’s why the last step is corrections. The first two things
you do in editing are make the person you edit trust your judgment, by
complementing, and then suggesting how to make it better. Then after they trust
you, and you haven't been a mean Margaret, you give your suggestions in a nice
and helpful way.
I
also realized while watching these videos that I tend to be either a whatever William
or a defensive Dave. Sometimes when peers edit my paper I tend to discredit
them because they are the same age as me and I turn in to a whatever William,
and stop listening. Even though these videos made me realize that if peers can
see my mistakes then the teacher will definitely be able to see them as well. I
also turn into a defensive Dave; I have the feeling that I worked really hard
on my paper and that my peers read it in five minutes and try to change
everything. I need to realize that my peers are only trying to help, and that I
shouldn't get caught up with all of the changes but look for the opportunity to
grow. So all in all these videos taught me the importance of peer editing and
how to do it properly.
Assistive Technologies
The
Mountbatten is a tool that allows blind students to type in brail hear the
letter they are typing and allow them to save their assignments on to a
computer. The Mountbatten also allows teachers who can't read brail to be able
to read the text because the writing also pops up on a computer screen. Honestly
I think this tool is beyond fantastic! Not only can it allow blind students to
be able to work effectively in regular classrooms, but it can also allow
teachers who don't know brail to be able to read their assignments. If I had a
blind student I would definitely use a Mountbatten because it would allow the
blind person to write not only for me, the teacher, but for the other students
as well. It would also allow blind students to be able to create portfolios on
a computer and keep a record of everything they have produced.
In
the "Teaching Math to the Blind" a professor from the University of
San Francisco brings up the valid point on how tough it is for blind students
to learn math. In regular brail blind students read the problem in a horizontal
fashion instead of the much easier vertical fashion. So the professor created a
grid with brail numbers and visual numbers, which is good if a teacher doesn't
know brail, to allow students to place the problems out vertically. The grid
also has a voice so it tells the student exactly what problem is set up. The
grid is actually very neat; the student sets up the problem and is able to read
it one line at a time instead of having one line of a bunch of numbers. With
this invention the professor claims that blind students will now be able to
learn basic math all the way up to simple algebra. With this invention it will
help blind students learn the fundamentals of math and ultimately give them a
better chance of receiving a steady job. If I had a blind student in my class I
would definitely want this grid not only to make teaching easier for me, but
make learning easier for the students as well.
Also
in the videos it showed how voice over on the Ipad allows blind people to still
be able to use technology and grow just as everyone else does. The thing that I
thought was most interesting about the Ipad is that it allows blind people to
be able to read regular books. With the IBook application a blind person is
able to chose what book the want to read and also have all the images in the
book described to them. The only thing about the voice over that I have
negative to say is that it looks like it is extremely difficult to use. In both
videos the user has problems getting the Ipad to do exactly what they want, but
once the kinks are worked out then I definitely think that this will be
revolutionary for blind people.
Digital Smarts
In
the "Digital Smarts" video Mrs. Davis explains how she is teaching
not only her students, but her self to be more digitally smart as well. In her
classroom she allows her students to learn through doing activities that they
enjoy, such as twitter and virtual reality. She has her students learn how to
use podcasts, blogs, and other virtual experiences to allow them to get the
most out of their education. She won the award for having the best blog in the
United States, because of this strategy. One cool thing about Mrs. Davis's
classroom is that she takes this small town city in rural Georgia, and is
broadening their horizons, allowing them to connect with people all over the
world.
I
think Mrs. Davis's system and Dr. Strange's system is a lot alike. Both
teachers recognize that they only way a student will learn something are if
they want to do it, or if they do it themselves. In the video Mrs. Davis talks
about how she does not need to explain herself if she says a word that someone
doesn't know, because it's just like Dr. Strange says, if I don't know let's
find out. I think Mr. Davis uses a very effective way to teach and, apparently,
if she is winning best blog awards other people do as well.
Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteI like how honest you were about being defensive when a peer edits your writing. I think most people get defensive or take it personal to some extent when someone critiques your hard work. The videos were also a wonderful tool for me. It made me realize that I should be grateful for peer editing and not embarrassed.
I also agree with you that these new tools for vision impaired students are amazing! I don't believe the voice over tool would be difficult to use after some instruction and practice, however the voice itself may take some getting used to. I thought she spoke too fast which made some words unclear. Hopefully the settings could be changed slightly to accommodate everyone's preferences!
Your blog was very well written! I would only suggest adding links to the videos you are referring to into your paragraphs or headings.
"So all in all these videos taught me the importance of peer editing and how to do it properly. " Good. That is what was intended.
ReplyDeleteIf you have an iPhone, an iPad, an iPad mini, or a Mac you can try it out for yourself. Just go to Settings/General/Adaptive and set it as you wish. Close your eyes and practice. If you have no iSomething, try it out on an iPad in the Lab. I think you will find that it is NOT difficult to use.
"So all in all these videos taught me the importance of peer editing and how to do it properly. ..." are, not is
Thoughtful. Interesting.