In my first C4K assignment I was assigned to NoelK from Around the World with Phoenix Kids K-2 Noel's assignment was to write a 100 word story about anything he wanted. Noel wrote about a kid finding a key in the frosty grass at the park, and the key ended up opening up a treasure chest. There were some obvious grammatical errors in Noel's essay but it was well written for the most part. In my comment I told Noel that I liked how he used adjectives to describe the key and the grass, and how the key opened up a treasure chest. I finished by asking him what type of treasure it was and suggested that next time he use some more adjectives, and describe the treasure as well. This is the link to Noel's story, I recommend you check it out. Noel's Blog
C4K Kid #2
In my second C4K assignment I was assigned to Mikiya, who is Ms. McKeller's third grade class at Robbins Elementary in Prichard, Alabama. Mikiya wrote in her blog about how she loved her life. She described her family how she has 1 brother and 2 sisters, and then two more brothers on her dad's side. She wrote about her best friend, favorite food, favorite sport, and her birthday. I thought the most interesting thing in her blog was that she wrote that the person who inspires her is her teacher. This was awesome to me because I hope I am the type of teacher who inspires my students as well. In my comment for Mikiya I wrote about how I like how she loved her life and the common interests we have. I also suggested that she be more elaborate about her best friend and her nickname. I definitely think you should check out her blog and comment as well. Mikiya's Blog
C4K Kid #3
For this C4K assignment I was assigned to Lukis, who is a year 5 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ, and his teacher is Miss Lavakula. Lukis did a Google presentation in his blog where he talked about his favorite singers, things to do, foods, and video games. I thought that it was really cool that Lukis is already able to make a presentation and he is on in year 5. I also thought it was really neat that he goes to school in New Zealand, and that I am all the way in Mobile, Alabama leaving a comment on his presentation. I left a comment talking about how I liked the fact that his favorite singers are 50 cent and Usher. Then I asked him what his favorite sport is, because he said he liked playing sports but he didn't say which ones. I definitely think you should check out and comment on his presentation at Lukis's Blog.
C4K Kid #4
My Fourth C4K assignment I received a young girl named Brandi, she is in Mrs. Vannoy's first grade class at Nan Gray Davis Elementary school in Theodore, Al. In her blog post Brandi writes that she loves Mrs. Vonnoy and that she is sweet and the best. It just amazes me every time I am assigned a comment for kids assignment because each time I am blown away with what kids already know how to do. Brandi is in First grade and already has a blog, I didn't even know how to spell my last name in First Grade let alone know how to create a blog post. I definitely think anyone reading this she check out Brandi's blog and give her some encouragement to keep on learning, because if she can already accomplish this in the first grade her possibilities are endless. Brandi's Blog
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